Thursday, November 28, 2019

Critical Reflection

1. Module Learning

At the start of the module, the goals that I have set out to achieve is to sharpen my English writing skills to aid myself in the future once I graduate and to be able to receive feedback appropriately. Since week 1, I have gone through many different forms of exercises that give me the opportunity to achieve my goals. The first form of exercise is to be able to write the investigation report and also the reader summary. From the exercises, I was able to practice my English writing skills and also to figure out my style of writing. After writing, there was a peer review that was held in class which then, it also gave me the opportunity to practice on how to improve myself through feedback. I personally feel that receiving feedback from peers is an important skill as it will always be a challenge to be constructive when the peer evaluation is going on. After weeks of practice, I realized that I have reached my goals. Besides reaching my stated goals, I have also learned how to write more proficiently, to be able to craft a report professionally and lastly, to be able to siphon out important information from an article more efficiently

2. Project Learning


During the process of my project work, I realized and experienced first hand the difficulty of researching articles to prove our point. My team invested a lot of our time to search up on articles or journals that turns out not to be related or it seemed promising at the start but eventually, the article veered off in a different direction. Through this journey, I actually realized that writing a report is definitely going to be a challenge, but if I am able to look for the journals that are related more efficiently, it will surely ease the workload on writing a report. After the completion of the report, the next challenge that I faced was to identify the important points to go on to the presentation slides. It was tough as all the points seem so important that I have to add everything in, but after going through and siphoning out the important points, I was able to minimize the content and thus, making my presentation points concise and straightforward without all the unnecessary data. 

Presentation to me was the less stressful part of the project as I was given the exposure since young to practice talking to a large group of people. The feedback that I received was that I spoke too quickly and monotonously. To practice, I recorded myself presenting as per normal and I understood what was actually happening. As I have a deep voice, speaking monotonously makes my presentation really boring. To improve myself, I will use any chance to present as I can learn how to moderate my words and also vary my tone as I speak. 

3. Presentation Showcase

During the presentation showcase, there were a few groups that really caught my attention. Firstly, it was their strong start to the presentation. There was one group which started off really well as they also spoke fluently. The presenter spoke really clear and he also paused between his sentence so as to moderate the speed of his presentation. Next, the other group that caught my attention was their slides. Their slides were really nicely done and it aided their explanation to their proposed solution. In conclusion, for a presentation to be successful, it is important to have well-designed slides to help the audience to understand their presentation and also a presenter that is able to moderate their speech and tone.

Saturday, November 2, 2019

[Group 1] Technical Writing - Draft 2

1.0 Background

When licensed companies started selling approved Personal Mobility Devices (PMDs) by the Land Transport Authority (LTA), this can potentially increase the number of users travelling on shared paths and footpaths and are permitted to bring it onto public transport. It created jobs for delivery riders and brings convenience to users. However, with an increased amount of PMDs, risks of an accident are bound to happen regarding safety. Safety accidents are mainly collisions and battery explosions. Collisions do happen regardless of any speed that users are proceeding with, without good situation awareness and proper usage of the machine then it has a chance for an accident to happen. Battery explosions are mostly electrical issues with the circuitry or batteries. These could be manufacturing defects or improper PMD usages such as overcharging of batteries or usage of unsuitable charger or battery. Causes of these accidents may be due to recklessness or complacency. In the worst-case scenario, these could lead to deaths to the user or road users. The ideal situation would be for PMD users and pedestrians to coexist with one another.

1.1 Current Situation

PMDs were introduced in Singapore in 2013 and only in 2017 then it started to get popular among the citizens as an alternative mode of transport to work. Since 2017, there were 213 reported cases and from those 213 cases, 152 were on roads and 46 in public spaces. From this rise in accidents, the government has implemented laws such as the Active Mobility Act in aims to improve the cohesiveness of pedestrians and PMD users sharing the same footpaths. The Singapore government has been under a lot of stress as the citizens are questioning their safety on footpaths after a steep increase in accidents caused by PMD users. Many of the accidents were caused by teenagers or young adults which is a huge problem for the public because of their recklessness. A part of young riders was observed to be riding modified electric vehicles which surpass the requirements of an approved electric vehicle. Modifications done are mainly on the rear wheel with a stronger motor which increases the speed of the vehicle. Regardless of whether a PMD is modified or not, safe speed also does not determine zero-incident. PMD users are also seen not wearing safety gear while riding and are very reluctant to wear because of many factors like the hot weather or the ugly features of the gears. Another problem which highlights the safety issue is non-certified UL2272 PMDs. The UL2272 standard was adopted by LTA as it covers the electrical system of the whole device to reduce the risk of PMD fires. Many PMDs today in Singapore are still non-UL2272 certified and are still allowed on the roads until June 30, 2020, after which it will automatically be de-registered and not allowed to be used on public paths. Battery fires have also been a problem today because of over-charging of PMDs or using unsuitable chargers and LTA has already implemented voluntary disposal of non-UL2272 certified PMDs with a cash incentive for early birds who disposes their vehicles before November 30, 2019. This program encourages users who have non-UL2272 PMDs to surrender their device volunteeringly. Vehicles which are UL2272 certified does not determine no fire risks. After many recommendations and solutions implemented, there has not been much improvement to the situation.

1.2 Context of the Problem

As mentioned above in the current situation, over the years, accidents involving PMDs have increased in great numbers. Concerned citizens are constantly worrying over their safety while walking on footpaths and shared paths around their neighbourhood. The debate over whether this mobility device should be banned in Singapore is still an issue as many believe that there are other possible methods to solve this problem. 

1.3 Main Stakeholders

The main stakeholders that are impacted by this would be the government agencies and PMD-related businesses. For licensed PMD retailers, the impact would be on their business profitability. With newly revised rules and regulations by LTA and Active Mobility Act (AMA), these retailers often suffer a loss in sales in order to comply with restrictions. From the article “New laws throttle back PMD sales” by Lim (2018), Chew Boon Hur, Mobot’s General Manager mentioned that there was up to 40 per cent drop in sales as potential customers are hesitant of purchasing PMDs due to new rules that they have yet to become familiar with.

Government agencies such as LTA bears a great responsibility when it comes to PMD-related issues. They are the ones that govern the law to ensure safety compliance is met when one purchases, sell and use PMDs. Not only that, LTA often becomes the source of blame whenever a serious issue pertaining to PMDs arise. 

Although they are not part of the main stakeholders, the general public is also greatly impacted in terms of their safety. The general public would include pedestrians and PMD users. Due to recent accidents, there has been a bad light shone over PMD users. There are reckless riders, however, there are a majority of those such as the disabled and deliverymen who uses the PMD for mobility and livelihood. Although PMDs bring convenience into our lives, it may also harm our safety when it is under the control of complacent riders. Ensuring that the pedestrians feel safe travelling and sharing the same footpath with PMD riders should be a top priority, hence, the impact would be on the safety of their lives.

1.4 Importance of the Situation

Government agencies such as LTA are implementing new rules for PMDs on the ground. LTA are the ones that can rectify the current situation with PMDs to prevent any conflict with the community and PMD users. It is important to take note of how the PMD-related businesses are impacted by the current situation as without people buying or illegally modifying their PMDs, such businesses would be facing a huge loss on their products. With the new laws and regulations on PMDs, there has been a decreasing amount of sales on PMDs. 

2.0 Problem Statement

When licensed PMD retailers started selling LTA-approved Personal Mobility Device(PMDs), it enabled users to purchase and use it as an alternative mode of transport. This increased the number of users travelling on footpaths or shared paths which led to higher risks of accidents which are caused by recklessness and complacency. The ideal situation would be for PMD users and pedestrians to coexist with one another.

3.0 Purpose Statement

The objective of this proposal is to suggest strategies that can be implemented by the Land Transport Authority to increase safety awareness about the benefits of using PMDs.

4.0 Proposed Solution

The proposed solution is to educate riders with a safe riding program which includes both Practical and Theory lessons.

Practical: - “Ride a PMD” Simulators can provide users with a virtual experience of what it is like to be on the footpaths or shared paths to enable them to have better situational awareness when riding. Users must be examined in their situational awareness and how they handle different scenarios to analyse the actions they will take in such situations and ensure that every action they take is justifiable as a safe action. Users must be qualified and pass the simulation test in order to proceed out be a qualified PMD rider. 

Theory: - Theory classes have to be attended regardless of any age in order to ride a PMD. Users have to be competent in handling the machine wherever they are and even at home. This is due to the increased amount of collisions and fire risk that is happening in the country. In order for PMD to be continued being regarded as an alternative mode of transport, it is paramount for beginners to have the knowledge to operate one. 

Such theory will cover the fire risk such as UL2272 certificate, why is it so important to know what does the certificate mean? And how an unsuitable charger can affect or increase the risk of battery explosion? And how to manage when there is a fire? 

Videos of case studies have to be broadcasted as a constant reminder to people who are soon-to-be permitted to operate a PMD. This is because it is important to have a safety habit and mindset when one is operating a PMD and he/she will be able to spread the awareness to other users to always remember to keep the shared paths safe. 

With the proposal of developing the “Practical and Theory” Lessons for existing and new PMD riders, we have thought of recommending this to LTA, with selecting the LTA’s Sin Ming main office to conduct theory lesson as well as certain community centres to conduct practical lessons. The reason for conducting theory lessons in the LTA’s main office is because the coverage of different safety topics such as the UL2272 certification and road awareness needs different speakers to relay the topics across the audiences. The course comes with a first to first basis and applicants need to book the dates available for the course online. Practical lessons are to be conducted at selected community clubs because of the open area that is needed for simulation. With practical lessons based at community clubs, it will be convenient for residents around the neighbourhood to attend. 

As daily commuters, we observed and experienced trauma when PMD is approaching us. The speed that they are approaching shows no intention of them to give way even though it is a shared path. These does not discourage us from wanting PMD to be banned but instead, PMD is eco-friendly as it promotes lesser usage of fuel-driven vehicles so there are lesser pollution to the environment and it encourages commuters in the country to hop onto this alternative mode of transport. 

5.0 Benefits

The benefits of the proposed solutions weigh differently for different stakeholders. Firstly, the group of people that will gain the most benefit would definitely be the citizens, both PMD riders and pedestrians. With the implementation of the above, we are able to increase safety awareness regarding PMD by educating the public. The knowledge imparted onto PMD riders will create a better understanding of the pros and cons of the usage of PMD. Not only will the shared pathways be safer, but the surrounding community will overall have a safer environment to live in as PMD users are now able to handle the device with care, thus, fire breakouts will no longer be a worry. 

Secondly, for PMD retailers, sales will improve because the knowledge gained from the Practical and Theory lessons will help potential customers decide whether or not they should purchase the device. Previously, customers found it difficult to make a decision to purchase a PMD as they were not familiar with the rules and regulations that LTA has implemented, which plummeted the sales in the PMD-retail industry. To avoid getting their device taken away, they would rather not take the risk of purchasing the device when they are doubtful of the law. After going through this course, buyers are more certain of the deciding factors when purchasing a PMD. With that, the PMD-related businesses will flourish. 

Lastly, as LTA holds the biggest responsibility for managing road safety in Singapore, the result of this course will reduce the accident rates and increase knowledge for PMDs which is ultimately the goal that both us and LTA share. With lesser reported cases around the country, there will be less manpower needed to be deployed to the scene, which leads to more available manpower for developing and focus on other road management issues in Singapore that can be further enhanced. 

6.0 Evaluation

Our solution will be able to benefit the majority of citizens as it will be mandatory for all current and soon-to-be PMD users to attend the safe riding course. However, after completing the course, it is down to the individual to abide by the law. 

In terms of feasibility, the proposed solution is doable only if we can ensure that the grassroots organisations are willing to embark on this safe riding programme together with LTA. If the grassroots of a particular region in Singapore feels that this is unnecessary due to the low rate of PMD-related accidents in that cluster, they may not receive this offer to start this course in their neighbourhood community centre. The facilities in community centres are mainly used for enrichment purposes and equipped with lessons that are usually catered to the interest of the demographics in that neighbourhood. If the organisation does not see the importance of this Practical and Theory lessons for a neighbourhood with no reported PMD cases, they would not want to advertise such programmes for their people. Furthermore, there are very limited rooms and spaces in most of the community centres here in Singapore. Thus, they would not want to sacrifice their facilities for a programme that may possibly have zero participants. 

Tuesday, October 29, 2019

[Group 1] Technical Writing - Draft 1

Background

When licensed companies started selling LTA-approved Personal Mobility Devices (PMDs), this can potentially increase the amount of users travelling on shared paths and footpaths and are permitted to bring it onto public transport. It created jobs for delivery riders and brings convenience to users. However, with an increased amount of PMDs, risks of an accident are bound to happen regarding to safety. Safety accidents are mainly collisions and battery explosions. Collisions do happen regardless of any speed that users are proceeding with, without good situation awareness and proper usage of the machine then it has a chance for an accident to happen. Battery explosions are mostly electrical issues with the circuitry or batteries. These could be manufacturing defects or improper PMD usage such as overcharging of batteries or usage of unsuitable charger or battery. Causes of these accidents may be due to recklessness or complacency. In the worst case scenario, these could lead to deaths to the user or road users. The ideal situation would be for PMD users and pedestrians to coexist with one another.

Current Situation

PMDs were introduced in Singapore in 2013 and only in 2017 then it started to get popular among the citizens as an alternative mode of transport to work. Since 2017, there were 213 reported cases and from that 213 cases, 152 were on roads and 46 in public spaces. From this rise in accidents, the government has implemented laws such as the Active Mobility Act in aims to improve the cohesiveness of pedestrians and PMD users sharing the same footpaths. The Singapore government has been under a lot of stress as the citizens are questioning their safety on footpaths after a steep increase in accidents caused by PMD users. Many of the accidents were caused by teenagers or young adults which is a huge problem to the public because of their recklessness. A part of young riders were observed to be riding modified electric vehicles which surpass the requirements of an approved electric vehicle. Modifications done are mainly on the rear wheel with stronger motor which increases the speed of the vehicle. Regardless of whether a PMD is modified or not, safe speed also does not determine zero-incident. PMD users are also seen not wearing safety gear when riding and are very reluctant to wear because of many factors like the hot weather or the ugly features of the gears. Another problem which highlight safety issue is non-certified UL2272 PMDs. The UL2272 standard was adopted by LTA as it covers the electrical system of the whole device to reduce the risk of PMD fires. Many PMDs today in Singapore are still non-UL2272 certified, and are still allowed on the roads until June 30, 2020, after which it will automatically be de-registered and not allowed to be used on public paths. Battery fires has also been a problem today because of over-charging of PMDs or using unsuitable chargers and LTA has already implemented a volunteering disposal of non-UL2272 certified PMDs with an incentive for early birds who disposes their vehicles before November 30, 2019. The volunteering program encourages non-UL2272 PMD users to surrender their vehicle and certified vehicles does not determine no fire risks. After many recommendations and solutions implemented, there has not been much improvement to the situation. 

Context of the Problem

As mentioned above in the current situation, over the years, accidents involving PMDs have increased in great numbers. Concerned citizens are constantly worrying over their safety while walking on footpaths and shared paths around their neighbourhood. The debate over whether this mobility device should be banned in Singapore is still an issue as many believe that there are other possible methods to solve this problem. 

Main Stakeholders

The main stakeholders that are impacted by this would be the government agencies and PMD-related businesses.

For licensed PMD retailers, the impact would be on their business profitability. With newly revised rules and regulations by LTA and Active Mobility Act (AMA), these retailers often suffer a loss in sales in order to comply with restrictions. From the article “New laws throttle back PMD sales” by Lim (2018), Chew Boon Hur, Mobot’s General Manager mentioned that there was up to 40 per cent drop in sales as potential customers are hesitant of purchasing the PMD due to new rules that they have yet to become familiar with.

Government agencies such as LTA bears a great responsibility when it comes to PMD-related issues. They are the ones that govern the law to ensure safety compliance is met when one purchase, sells and uses PMDs. Not only that, LTA often becomes the source of blame whenever a serious issue pertaining to PMDs arises. 

Although they are not part of the main stakeholders, the general public is also greatly impacted in terms of their safety. The general public would include pedestrians and PMD users. Due to recent accidents, there has been a bad light shone over PMD users. There are reckless riders, however, there are a majority of those such as the disabled and deliverymen who uses the PMD for mobility and livelihood. Although PMDs bring convenience into our lives, it may also harm our safety when it is under the control of complacent riders. Ensuring that the pedestrians feel safe travelling and sharing the same footpath with PMD riders should be a top priority, hence, the impact would be on the safety of their lives.

Importance of the Situation 

Government agencies such as LTA are implementing new rules for PMDs on the ground. LTA are the ones that can rectify the current situation with PMDs to prevent any conflict with the community and PMD users. It is important to take note of how the PMD-related businesses are impacted by the current situation as without people buying or illegally modifying their PMDs, such businesses would be facing a huge loss on their products. With the new laws and regulations on PMDs, there has been a decreasing amount of sales on PMDs. 

Ideal Situation

The ideal situation would be for PMD users and pedestrians to coexist with one another.

Problem Statement

When licensed PMD retailers started selling LTA-approved Personal Mobility Device(PMDs), it enabled users to purchase and use it as an alternative mode of transport. This increased the number of users travelling on footpaths or shared paths which led to higher risks of accidents which are caused by recklessness and complacency. The ideal situation would be for PMD users and pedestrians to coexist with one another.

Purpose Statement

The objective of this proposal is to suggest strategies that can be implemented by the Land Transport Authority to increase safety awareness about the benefits of using PMDs.

Tuesday, October 22, 2019

Annotated Summary

According to an article, “PAP town councils could ban personal mobility devices from void desk as they review by-laws” from TODAY online (2019), town councils that are managed by People’s Action Party (PAP) could forbid the use of personal mobility devices (PMDs) at the void decks of public housing blocks. Void decks include lift lobbies, corridors and the area around the letterbox.

Dr. Teo Ho Pin, the overall chairman said that the town councils will re-examine the by-laws to coincide with the Active Mobility Act and will not hesitate to forbid PMDs from void decks. Under the act, it states the rules of the use of PMDs on footpaths and it also states that the speed limit on footpaths is 10km/h. However, these rules do not apply at the void decks of public housing estates.

PAP will continue monitoring the concerns of its residents and will also work closely with the Land Transport Authority on promoting safe riding. There were questions raised to the Parliament to include void decks in the act. However, void decks are excluded as they are not necessary for connectivity. For this reason, town councils can implement their own regulations to forbid the use of PMDs in void decks to further defend their residence.

Speeding PMD riders has been hitting the headlines as online readers submitted their concerns regarding PMD users. They are concerned over food delivery riders for putting children and elderlies at risk as they are always in a hurry to deliver and accept new jobs. And most often, they are speeding along corridors or footpaths.

In conclusion, the PMD situation in Singapore is not as simple as it seems to be. There are many considerations that have to be accountable for and the necessary rules have to be implied and enforced to protect the residence from any mishaps.

References: 
Cheng, K. (2019). PAP town councils could ban personal mobility devices from void decks as they review by-laws. [online] TODAYonline. Available at: https://www.todayonline.com/singapore/pap-town-councils-could-ban-personal-mobility-devices-void-decks-they-review-laws?cid=h3_referral_inarticlelinks_03092019_todayonline [Accessed 15 Oct. 2019].

Thursday, October 10, 2019

Summary Reader Response Draft 3: Cross Island Site Investigations


According to an online article, “Nature Group Seeks More Information on Impact of Cross Island Site Investigations” from Today Online (2018), the drilling works in MacRitchie forest for the Cross Island MRT line has led to concerns due to the lack of details that affirm the effectiveness of precautions taken by the Land Transport Authority (LTA). Ms Chloe Tan, project manager of Love Our MacRitchie Forest group has received questions for LTA from nine parties. Camera traps were set up three to six months before and after works to validate measures. The data collected was studied and the project was classified to have a “mainly moderate” impact on wildlife. The harm of the on-site investigation works included drillings of 16 boreholes to study the earth conditions for the Cross Island MRT Line (CRL) to determine a tunnel under MacRitchie forest or to skirt around it. Nonetheless, LTA will be working with the various agencies on the second phase of assessment to forecast the impact of both alignments since that there has been a debate on the after-effects for residents living in the area. Hence, tunnelling works under MacRitchie forest will be more favourable rather than skirting around it.

Going under MacRitchie forest will be more favourable as environmental organisations such as the National Parks Board and other nature groups have been working with LTA for over three years before the site investigation started. LTA was aware of the environmental impact in which, there was a significant reduction of required boreholes from 72 to 16 (LTA as cited in Wong, 2018). There was also a comprehensive plan that instructs workers on how to operate the engine pump to avoid petrol leakage (Wong, 2018). The actions taken by LTA shows that they are taking all the necessary precautions to reduce the impact of the ecosystem.

Additionally, the cost to skirt around MacRitchie reservoir will be an additional $2 billion as compared to going under the MacRitchie reservoir (Toh, 2019). The writer mentions that an additional $2 billion will be needed to skirt around MacRitchie reservoir as there is more work that needs to be done along the alternative route. This created fear for residents living in the area as they might need to relocate due to the government procuring more land for the construction (Lim, 2016). It includes three worksites, a building facility and ventilation shafts to circulate air inside the tunnel (Chong as cited in Lim, 2016).

Adding on, Building the Cross Island line across could save commuters 6 minutes of travelling time as it will be 5km shorter as compared to skirting around MacRitchie reservoir (Toh, 2019). With the reduction in travelling time, commuters travelling across the island will be able to save up to 50 to 70 minutes in travel time (Minister Khaw as cited in Navaratnarajah, 2019). I strongly believe that this new MRT line will reduce the congestion by giving commuters more flexibility in getting to their destination.

In conclusion, tunnelling works under MacRitchie forest will be more functional as compared to skirting around it. Undeniably, this will cause concerns to the public and might potentially impact the environment in Singapore. However, these concerns can be mitigated by LTA doing their part to do all the relevant data collection and precautions needed before deciding which will be the way forward. If LTA is able to reassure the public by sharing their data collected and working closely with the relevant communities, building the Cross Island MRT line underneath MacRitchie forest will be better for Singapore.

References

Wong, D. (2018). MRT soil probe: Steps to ease impact on wildlife working. Retrieved 29 September 2019, from https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/environment/mrt-soil-probe-steps-to-ease-impact-on-wildlife-working

Toh, W (2019). Cross Island Line: Running under nature reserve or skirting it both feasible, says LTA. Retrieved 29 September 2019, from https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/transport/cross-island-line-running-under-nature-reserve-or-skirting-it-both-feasible-says

Lim, A (2016). Cross Island Line sparks residents' fears. Retrieved 29 September 2019, from https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/transport/cross-island-line-sparks-residents-fears

Navaratnarajah, R. (2019). Future Cross Island Line to cut travel time by up to 70 mins. Retrieved 29 September 2019, from https://www.propertyguru.com.sg/property-management-news/2019/1/177791/future-cross-island-line-to-cut-travel-time-by-up-to-70-mins

Thursday, October 3, 2019

Summary Reader Response Draft 2


According to an online article, “Nature Group Seeks More Information on Impact of Cross Island Site Investigations” from Today Online (2018), the drilling works in MacRitchie forest for the Cross Island MRT line has led to concerns due to the lack of details that affirm the effectiveness of precautions taken by the Land Transport Authority (LTA). Ms Chloe Tan, project manager of Love Our MacRitchie Forest group has received questions for LTA from nine parties. Camera traps were set up three to six months before and after works to validate measures. The data collected was studied and the project was classified to have a “mainly moderate” impact on wildlife. The harm of the on-site investigation works included drillings of 16 boreholes to study the earth conditions for the Cross Island MRT Line (CRL) to determine a tunnel under MacRitchie forest or to skirt around it. Nonetheless, LTA will be working with the various agencies on the second phase of assessment to forecast the impact of both alignments since that there has been a debate on the after-effects for residents living in the area. Hence, tunneling works under MacRitchie forest will be more favourable rather than skirting around it. 

Environmental organisations such as the National Parks Board and other nature groups have been working with LTA for over three years before the site investigation started. LTA was aware of the environmental impact in which, there was a significant reduction of required boreholes from 72 to 16 (LTA as cited in Wong, 2018). There was also a comprehensive plan that instructs workers on how to operate the engine pump to avoid petrol leakage (Wong, 2018). The actions taken by LTA shows that they are taking all the necessary precautions to reduce the impact of the ecosystem. 

Moreover, the cost to skirt around MacRitchie reservoir will be an additional $2 billion as compared to going under the MacRitchie reservoir (Toh, 2019). The writer mentions that an additional $2 billion will be needed to skirt around MacRitchie reservoir as there is more work that needs to be done along the alternative route. This created fear for residents living in the area as they might need to relocate due to the government procuring more land for the construction (Lim, 2016). It includes three worksites, a building facility and ventilation shafts to circulate air inside the tunnel (Chong as cited in Lim, 2016).

Building the Cross Island line across could save commuters 6 minutes of travelling time as it will be 5km shorter as compared to skirting around MacRitchie reservoir (Toh, 2019). With the reduction in travelling time, commuters travelling across the island will be able to save up to 50 to 70 minutes in travel time (Minister Khaw as cited in Navaratnarajah, 2019). I strongly believe that this new MRT line will reduce the congestion by giving commuters more flexibility in getting to their destination. 

In conclusion, the option to go underneath the MacRitchie reservoir will cause concerns to the public and might potentially impact the environment in Singapore. However, these concerns can be mitigated by LTA doing their part to do all the relevant data collection and precautions needed before deciding which will be the way forward. If LTA is able to reassure the public by sharing their data collected and working closely with the relevant communities, building the Cross Island MRT line underneath MacRitchie will be better for Singapore. 

References 

Wong, D. (2018). MRT soil probe: Steps to ease impact on wildlife working. Retrieved 29 September 2019, from https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/environment/mrt-soil-probe-steps-to-ease-impact-on-wildlife-working 

Toh, W (2019). Cross Island Line: Running under nature reserve or skirting it both feasible, says LTA. Retrieved 29 September 2019, from https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/transport/cross-island-line-running-under-nature-reserve-or-skirting-it-both-feasible-says

Lim, A (2016). Cross Island Line sparks residents' fears. Retrieved 29 September 2019, from https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/transport/cross-island-line-sparks-residents-fears 

Navaratnarajah, R. (2019). Future Cross Island Line to cut travel time by up to 70 mins. Retrieved 29 September 2019, from https://www.propertyguru.com.sg/property-management-news/2019/1/177791/future-cross-island-line-to-cut-travel-time-by-up-to-70-mins 

Sunday, September 29, 2019

Summary Reader Response Outline


Summarized Article’s Main Idea + Thesis Statement: (Level I Controlling Idea)

According to an online article, “Nature Group Seeks More Information on Impact of Cross Island Site Investigations” from Today Online (2018), the drilling works in MacRitchie forest for the Cross Island MRT line has led to concerns due to the lack of details that affirm the effectiveness of precautions taken by the Land Transport Authority (LTA). Ms Chloe Tan, project manager of Love Our MacRitchie Forest group has received questions for LTA from nine parties. Camera traps were set up three to six months before and after works to validate measures. The data collected was studied and the project was classified to have a “mainly moderate” impact on wildlife. The harm of the on-site investigation works included drillings of 16 boreholes to study the earth conditions for the MRT line to determine a tunnel under MacRitchie forest or to skirt around it. Nonetheless, LTA will be working with the various agencies on the second phase of assessment to forecast the impact of both alignments.

Drilling works in MacRitchie forest causes minimal panic and commotion amongst wildlife and the public.

1. First Supporting Idea - (Level II Controlling Idea)

Camera traps recorded the presence of wildlife such as the lesser mousedeer and the critically endangered Sunda Pangolin.

1. Second Supporting Idea - (Level II Controlling Idea)

90 camera traps were placed within a restricted area and findings suggested that similar fauna were present in the areas before and after site investigation works.

1. Third Supporting Idea - (Level II Controlling Idea)
An environmental impact assessment was done prior to the site investigation works and was classified to have “mainly moderate” impact if the proper precautions were taken.

Your Main Idea/Thesis Statement: (Level I Controlling Idea)

Tunneling works under MacRitchie forest will be more favorable rather than skirting around it.

1. First Supporting Idea - (Level II Controlling Idea)

LTA is taking the necessary precautions to mitigate the impact of wildlife in MacRitchie forest.

1. Explanation of the supporting idea

LTA has done the necessary precautions to reduce the impact on wildlife by having a detailed plan on how are they going to do their site investigations and operate machines in the forest.

1. Example or citation which supports your assertion
There was a comprehensive suite of mitigation measures, said LTA, such as reducing the number of boreholes required for the works from 72 to 16. 

1. Other statements which help support your assertion

1. Second Supporting Idea - (Level II Controlling Idea)

An additional cost of $2 billion to skirt around MacRitchie and also affecting homes of residents living in the area.

1. Explanation of the supporting idea

As skirting around MacRitchie will take a longer route, more work has to be done in built up areas and also the procurement of more residential land to build worksites and building facilities.

1. Example or citation which supports your assertion

Both options are feasible with adequate mitigation measures, said the Land Transport Authority (LTA), which has completed a major study of the potential impact of construction works on the environment and residents. Skirting the reserve would make for a longer route and is also the more expensive option.


1. Other statements which help support your assertion

1. Third Supporting Idea - (Level II Controlling Idea)

Shorter traveling time for commuters and beneficial for those needing to travel across Singapore.

1. Explanation of the supporting idea

Having shorter traveling time gives commuters the flexibility to choose their traveling path as well as reducing the congestion from the other MRT lines.

1. Example or citation which supports your assertion

Is expected to benefit over 100,000 households and reduce travel time by 50 to 70 minutes.


1. Other statements which help support your assertion

VII. Conclusion - Review of Main Idea (Tying Yours and That of the Summarized Article)

Building a tunnel underneath MacRitchie reservoir will cause panic to the public and ecosystem but this could be reduced drastically if the right steps were taken. LTA needs to study their data given and also work in hand with the various experts as well to share this data with the public. It will be more sensible to go across MacRitchie as it will reduce congestion in the other MRT lines.


Critical Reflection

1. Module Learning At the start of the module, the goals that I have set out to achieve is to sharpen my English writing skills to aid my...